together…haiku

https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/write-here-write-now/

……………………………………………………………………………………………..

it is now

here and this point in time

we promise to be together

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5 thoughts on “together…haiku

  1. the continuously unfolding act of a promise – so wonderful. I really like the way the opening of the second line — “here” — emphasizes not only the temporal facet of the here and now, but the physical (geophysical?) facet of the notion, which tends to be subtly (or not so much) lost in our time-based perspectives.

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