my baby…haiku

https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/08/23/haiku-horizons-prompt-brush/

………………………………

it was my brush with faith

when i first held you in my arms

my baby my son

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15 thoughts on “my baby…haiku

  1. Beautiful.. I liked your use of prompt…and the feelings expressed. God bless!!!

    Just to give a new perspective as it would reduce syllable count to less than seventeen..

    My baby, my son
    in my arms for the first time;
    ah, my brush with faith…

    RS:)

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