dreamland…haiku

https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/03/29/haiku-horizons-prompt-sleep/

take me in your arms

there is a beautiful world out there

take me there O sleep

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14 thoughts on “dreamland…haiku

  1. At the beginning of your haiku, I’m picturing my late husband taking me into his arms- so in crops a little sadness. At the end, sleep is the one- one that brings respite. nicely done

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