http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/03/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-12.html
I loved the recap of the haiku writing techniques. It is really amazing how one can express so much in a few words.
Here I have tried using the Wabi-Sabi style of haiku writing.
the tiny bud
opening its eyes to the world
spring all around
Oh! This is exquisite —
beautifully written.
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thanks Jen…:)
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Excellent haiku in which the chosen technique is so enormous and strong … it’s one of the toughest techniques I think … wabi-sabi … chapeau!
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Thanks Chev…u r my guru!
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I wonder what would happen if the buds refused to open their eyes? Oh, it’s too horrible a thought! 😉
Magical Key
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Ooh why would u think that?
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Oh I love this! ❤
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Thanks Becca…
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Shyness of that little bud.. that is beautiful
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thanks dear…:)
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It’s that time of year when we all rejoice at the opening of the buds—at last!
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